very basic and not very fair. some platforms feel like traps and the moving platforms feel very cheap and unfair. needs sound and more consistent sprites.
t'was gud. music was a bit grating and needs to have a solid loop, as it does eventually cut out. the characterc could also use a bit more expression, and their hands dont look very natural. no on i knows points to a piece of paper like these people do. but other than that, the dialogue options were good, even if they did all amount to the sam thing. the art that is shown is great and clearly shows a high standard of quality, and each character is clearly definable based solely on their look. not once did say, 'that character looks like that other character'. Can't really say i developed a 'connection' with any of the characters, although that could just be that this isn't my kind of game. hopefully when the next episode comes out, something a bit more interesting can happen, as the plot never really gripped me.
Thanks, you've given me a lot to think about.
I did decided to put hands in the scene to give the narrative a bit more character but wasn't too sure on the angle. As this is still the beta there's room for improvement and will take your opinion into consideration! I hope ep2 is more intriguing for you :)
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